tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post1194266405395657540..comments2023-05-22T08:36:32.253-07:00Comments on Remaking ME!: Friday Fictioneers- For PowerAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-24251499745772662012012-07-21T13:28:15.758-07:002012-07-21T13:28:15.758-07:00Exactly! I was hoping someone saw that in him. Som...Exactly! I was hoping someone saw that in him. Sometimes 100 words makes it very hard to show that. Thank you for answering that for me.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-79014253101917165492012-07-21T12:55:56.131-07:002012-07-21T12:55:56.131-07:00I looked at this for a week and I see what you mea...I looked at this for a week and I see what you mean by that. Maybe it's all in the comma or lack of. She is his twin sister, what makes her younger is the four minutes it took for her to come out after him. I hope that explains it?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-73622417305441677422012-07-21T06:19:05.527-07:002012-07-21T06:19:05.527-07:00It was the leading her there, showing her the dead...It was the leading her there, showing her the dead bird first. A cool, calculated sacrifice and probably especially as it's his sister. He's one to fear.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-4747432391421157672012-07-14T23:03:19.120-07:002012-07-14T23:03:19.120-07:00Quite a shocking outcome - I wasn't expecting ...Quite a shocking outcome - I wasn't expecting that! Nicely gruesome. I didn't understand the line 'wrestled by four minutes to the ground' but I suppose that's more a 'language' issue. This was a very strong submission.<br /><br />http://castelsarrasin.wordpress.com/2012/07/13/every-cloud-friday-fictioneers-july-2012/Sandra Crookhttp://www.castelsarrasin.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-17606318253895348162012-07-14T19:21:36.191-07:002012-07-14T19:21:36.191-07:00Thanks, I don't really think it's a rivalr...Thanks, I don't really think it's a rivalry so much as his desire to have more power than what he's got. I think eating his sister was probably just the easiest route to take.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-12571097522028599872012-07-14T19:19:20.118-07:002012-07-14T19:19:20.118-07:00Okay Roxann I'm going to suggest you watch it ...Okay Roxann I'm going to suggest you watch it again on Netflix or something. Watch it just because it's such a cute movie. Otis saw the crow sitting on Milo's box in the swamp. It was a really quick meeting.<br /><br />Was it the two crows, the one eating the other, that gave you an inkling?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-55809548184232059222012-07-14T19:13:41.206-07:002012-07-14T19:13:41.206-07:00I'm wondering if it's the "yes" ...I'm wondering if it's the "yes" that's so gruesome? Is it because he took the time to answer his sister's question before he eats her or is it that he eat her? Or is it that it's his twin that he is eating? Thank you for coming by and also remarking on Facebook too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-77720966829463874262012-07-14T19:10:49.344-07:002012-07-14T19:10:49.344-07:00Thank you Maggie. The story as it is won't all...Thank you Maggie. The story as it is won't allow her to fight back. If I can make this longer maybe I can do entire back story leading to this. Who knows. Thanks for coming by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-27629463550931008802012-07-14T19:09:15.806-07:002012-07-14T19:09:15.806-07:00Thanks, I'm glad it's not a complete hack ...Thanks, I'm glad it's not a complete hack job. Thanks for fixing the addy as well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-39434704165879931932012-07-14T19:08:25.756-07:002012-07-14T19:08:25.756-07:00Yuk over the bird or yuk over one twin eating the ...Yuk over the bird or yuk over one twin eating the other?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-44075853259567647052012-07-14T19:07:54.263-07:002012-07-14T19:07:54.263-07:00I'm glad you liked it, thanks.I'm glad you liked it, thanks.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-7609346666205327162012-07-14T19:07:37.002-07:002012-07-14T19:07:37.002-07:00Thanks for stopping by and commenting.Thanks for stopping by and commenting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-8724611566524142232012-07-14T19:07:04.298-07:002012-07-14T19:07:04.298-07:00Thank you, it's very dark. I surprise myself s...Thank you, it's very dark. I surprise myself sometimes.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-87743180339529520662012-07-14T13:22:50.242-07:002012-07-14T13:22:50.242-07:00I like the supernatural story behind this one. Ano...I like the supernatural story behind this one. Another glimpse into what could be a much larger story. The way you set it up was great and I didn't suspect the end until it happened. I'd be keeping an eye on him in the future though! <br /><br />Otis and Milo was one of my favorite stories too, but I don't remember the bird. I have a bad memory, though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-70712216560911050102012-07-14T13:21:50.217-07:002012-07-14T13:21:50.217-07:00Talk about sibling rivalry! Ouch!
Not a bad story...Talk about sibling rivalry! Ouch!<br /><br />Not a bad story for a rush job. Kudos on the quick thinking.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07880002462186879806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-69802787190812107432012-07-14T10:42:26.153-07:002012-07-14T10:42:26.153-07:00Ouch! Did NOT see that coming. Definitely didn'...Ouch! Did NOT see that coming. Definitely didn't need to worry about settling on a different kind of bird Atiya - it worked. Shockingly gruesome. I liked it!<br /><br />I'm here: http://mysocalleddutchlife.wordpress.com/2012/07/13/canyon-ff-friday-the-13th-of-july-12/Mikhttp://mysocalleddutchlife.wordpress.com/2012/07/13/canyon-ff-friday-the-13th-of-july-12/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-90802020255982790122012-07-14T08:45:31.505-07:002012-07-14T08:45:31.505-07:00Wow! That is one nasty dude. I wish Michele had fo...Wow! That is one nasty dude. I wish Michele had fought back. It doesn't matter that the pic was a buzzard. The story worked either way.<br /><br />Here's mine: http://unexpectedpaths.com/friday-fictioneers/aftertherapture/Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09873692344869128982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-24186179354519629382012-07-13T17:38:02.234-07:002012-07-13T17:38:02.234-07:00Let me clarify the blog addy. www.rochelle-wisoff....Let me clarify the blog addy. www.rochelle-wisoff.blogspot.com/2012/07/arson.html<br />This time I remember the "html" but forgot the title.Rochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-44686869320608353832012-07-13T17:31:46.470-07:002012-07-13T17:31:46.470-07:00eeeeeew. Now that's sibling rivalry at its utm...eeeeeew. Now that's sibling rivalry at its utmost worst. Good bad job. <br />For anyone who might happen by<br />www.rochelle-wisoff.blogspot.com/2012/07.htmlRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-66153233082498033092012-07-13T15:18:59.457-07:002012-07-13T15:18:59.457-07:00I fixed that, and thank you for catching it. Sadly...I fixed that, and thank you for catching it. Sadly I am the youngest, lol if you want to look at it that way. I should fear for myself. Thanks for coming by and commenting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-63522912395942365012012-07-13T14:30:02.486-07:002012-07-13T14:30:02.486-07:00Yuk! Definitely unexpected!!Yuk! Definitely unexpected!!janethttp://sustainabilitea.wordpress.com/2012/07/12/friday-fictioneers/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-70005378301543469312012-07-13T14:29:30.121-07:002012-07-13T14:29:30.121-07:00Oh that's gruesome Atiya. I liked it :)
........Oh that's gruesome Atiya. I liked it :)<br /><br />.......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-85401559805743454912012-07-13T13:51:55.039-07:002012-07-13T13:51:55.039-07:00Wow! Pretty gruesome to be a rush job, like you sa...Wow! Pretty gruesome to be a rush job, like you said! Lol...nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-28525965278469223502012-07-13T13:04:38.667-07:002012-07-13T13:04:38.667-07:00Very dark and I liked the surprise ending.
Here is...Very dark and I liked the surprise ending.<br />Here is my offering this week yaralwrites.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-17468129591709812742012-07-13T12:22:59.331-07:002012-07-13T12:22:59.331-07:00Whoa! I'm glad I am the oldest! :P Creepy unex...Whoa! I'm glad I am the oldest! :P Creepy unexpected ending, but nicely written. I did see that there is a missing question mark, where Michelle is asking where the crow is.<br /><br />Here's mine. http://mahjira.blogspot.com/2012/07/bird-friday-fictioneer.htmlMahjirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04685917075106367032noreply@blogger.com