tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post3328049133848542995..comments2023-05-22T08:36:32.253-07:00Comments on Remaking ME!: Friday Flash Fiction: AlphaAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-25159241144469769752012-03-16T13:20:49.435-07:002012-03-16T13:20:49.435-07:00It seems it's hard to stay top dog for long.
...It seems it's hard to stay top dog for long. <br /><br />Here's mine: http://teschoenborn.com/2012/03/15/friday-fictioneers-2/T.E.Schoenbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05618470366896573356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-9262416498899584342012-03-16T02:34:28.652-07:002012-03-16T02:34:28.652-07:00May it was a little over kill... I hope you didn&#...May it was a little over kill... I hope you didn't cry, cry did you? Thank you for stopping by, and yours was definitely a fun one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-83550783793070880512012-03-16T02:21:37.430-07:002012-03-16T02:21:37.430-07:00That was very sad. Haunting almost. Off to find a...That was very sad. Haunting almost. Off to find a kleenex, this could be a long day.<br /><br />Mine's at http://castelsarrasin.wordpress.com/2012/03/16/straight-talking-friday-fictioneers-16-march-2012/<br /><br />It's not sad.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-66659790818443638212012-03-15T20:04:24.926-07:002012-03-15T20:04:24.926-07:00Yes there was honor in Alpha finding a place to d...Yes there was honor in Alpha finding a place to die. I'm not feeling this story though just because it was really hard to write. You should have seen the original it was a good 400+ words. I guess I wanted a little too much in this one. Thank you for dropping by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-29200033559925935512012-03-15T15:00:05.456-07:002012-03-15T15:00:05.456-07:00Not sure my first comment went through, but if not...Not sure my first comment went through, but if not I'm glad it didn't because I wanted to change it - the first time I'd read through your story, I didn't catch that he lost a fight to his son. <br /><br />It was a sad story, but there is honor in that setting. Poor Alpha. At least he was top dog for a while, and sired a strong alpha son to take his place.Madison Woodshttp://madisonwoods.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com