tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post3525375673413748232..comments2023-05-22T08:36:32.253-07:00Comments on Remaking ME!: Outland: Friday Flash FictionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-20821240641328612602012-03-27T18:54:14.993-07:002012-03-27T18:54:14.993-07:00I didn't see these (your link and Kris's) ...I didn't see these (your link and Kris's) on Friday's post. Sorry! Your story packs a wicked punch, definitely premeditated evil. I understood the last line as being Marta's, and understood what the gun signified.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-77993473118524227502012-03-25T01:10:28.993-07:002012-03-25T01:10:28.993-07:00You think so??? Wow, there's a thought.You think so??? Wow, there's a thought.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-29018452210443822372012-03-25T01:10:00.476-07:002012-03-25T01:10:00.476-07:00Yeah I've been getting that a lot. Marta said ...Yeah I've been getting that a lot. Marta said it. She's got a very bad day planned for Henry...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-37689093807943669152012-03-25T01:08:49.559-07:002012-03-25T01:08:49.559-07:00Maybe I should have clarified. Marta whispered it....Maybe I should have clarified. Marta whispered it. I'll remember that next time. Thank you for dropping byAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-8320742365659480232012-03-24T02:43:56.702-07:002012-03-24T02:43:56.702-07:00Oh my word! Very well written and a bit like a scr...Oh my word! Very well written and a bit like a screen play.Emma McCarthyhttp://freejournowriter.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-78460970489452395402012-03-23T21:44:16.784-07:002012-03-23T21:44:16.784-07:00I was a little confused at the end. Who said "...I was a little confused at the end. Who said "No you won't"? How was the gun connected?<br /><br />Otherwise, a good little story.littlewonder2http://littlewonder2.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-63077463538752434022012-03-23T13:55:13.289-07:002012-03-23T13:55:13.289-07:00Wow. Such evil in such a short time. I love it. Th...Wow. Such evil in such a short time. I love it. Thx for sharing.Shirleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04337958837908666504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-14136901978840879702012-03-23T13:38:51.521-07:002012-03-23T13:38:51.521-07:00Did Marta verbally say, "No, you won't&qu...Did Marta verbally say, "No, you won't" or was she just thinking it? It would indeed be a short and dismal day for Henry.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting mine<br /><br />http://russellgayer.blogspot.com/Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-41568910255481060502012-03-23T13:19:16.840-07:002012-03-23T13:19:16.840-07:00Yeah well she might be still mad at him for the ge...Yeah well she might be still mad at him for the gem stone thing. These are returning characters remember. Thanks for stopping by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-60402851806330368782012-03-23T12:59:01.491-07:002012-03-23T12:59:01.491-07:00Ah, nothing like seduction followed by betrayal. L...Ah, nothing like seduction followed by betrayal. Love it.<br /><br />Here's mine: http://teschoenborn.com/2012/03/22/friday-fictioneer-3/T.E.Schoenbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05618470366896573356noreply@blogger.com