tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post7517081527921875515..comments2023-05-22T08:36:32.253-07:00Comments on Remaking ME!: Friday Flash Fiction: A Country WalkAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-80388145835052137742012-05-25T11:37:07.688-07:002012-05-25T11:37:07.688-07:00I don't really know if they decided to explore...I don't really know if they decided to explore the rainbow. I have two older brothers that used to talk like that to each other. Of course they didn't call each other wanker, but yes I can kind of relate to that as well. Thank you for stopping by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-45261986494670847052012-05-25T11:35:12.849-07:002012-05-25T11:35:12.849-07:00I really wish I knew. I was completely focused on ...I really wish I knew. I was completely focused on the back and forth between Toddy and Errol, the noise could be anything. Thank you for stopping byAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-28676347269843602502012-05-24T12:06:45.642-07:002012-05-24T12:06:45.642-07:00Took me a while to get here, but I really liked th...Took me a while to get here, but I really liked that. Their dialogue sounded totally believable, too. Curious what's making the noise...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-64899073595356294192012-05-22T03:28:17.782-07:002012-05-22T03:28:17.782-07:00Cute. I raised three sons so I relate to little bo...Cute. I raised three sons so I relate to little boys. Sorry it's taken a week to drop by. I'd love to know what they found at the end of the rainbow. ;)<br />here's mine: www.rochelle-wisoff.blogspot.com/2012/05/miracle.htmlRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-89722342115915827862012-05-22T01:07:31.468-07:002012-05-22T01:07:31.468-07:00Hey no problem. For some reason when Toddy and Er...Hey no problem. For some reason when Toddy and Errol got names I immediately made them "British" If you ever seen the show Little Britain you'd see exactly where these two came from. Sort of a mix of Stand By Me, Harry Potter Little Britain and Denis the Menace. That seems like a lot for a short story doesn't it?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-88802418515114328082012-05-21T16:44:47.854-07:002012-05-21T16:44:47.854-07:00Great dialogue! I got a sense they were in the UK...Great dialogue! I got a sense they were in the UK somewhere (wanker and twat, hee). This is a pair I could see having lots of misadventures - a young (and salty) Abbot and Costello maybe? Thanks for stopping by earlier! <br /><br />Kathy<br />http://notforallmarkets.wordpress.com/2012/05/18/after/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-25822821470969278962012-05-21T12:18:23.784-07:002012-05-21T12:18:23.784-07:00Thank you for dropping by, Toddy and Errol, are su...Thank you for dropping by, Toddy and Errol, are supposed to be on one but I think the one Errol had planned just got interrupted.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-91846077256353440502012-05-21T11:27:40.994-07:002012-05-21T11:27:40.994-07:00Funny you mentioned that. When I proof read it, th...Funny you mentioned that. When I proof read it, thats the image I got. I'm glad someone else caught that. Thank you for stopping by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-54676607003503814222012-05-20T00:38:50.867-07:002012-05-20T00:38:50.867-07:00Great voices, sounds just like a couple of kids ou...Great voices, sounds just like a couple of kids out on an adventure - more than likely an older brother and younger sibling. Well done!Judeehttp://writetuit.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-46925664443547902252012-05-19T19:34:46.362-07:002012-05-19T19:34:46.362-07:00Very "Stand by Me." Kids in the woods al...Very "Stand by Me." Kids in the woods always bring out the sinister in my imagination. Here's mine: http://melodypearson.com/flash-fiction/may-18-2012-rainbows/AMelodyPearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11640330236677427145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-76029760982434637592012-05-19T17:25:26.730-07:002012-05-19T17:25:26.730-07:00I always see that on television when two boys star...I always see that on television when two boys start talking. I was aiming to mimic that, thank you reading.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-73940584032595831572012-05-19T17:22:58.266-07:002012-05-19T17:22:58.266-07:00I'm glad that I was able to pull that off. I l...I'm glad that I was able to pull that off. I loved you story as well. Thanks for commenting. Please please leave you link so others can blog hop...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-15598672876535328062012-05-19T17:21:16.684-07:002012-05-19T17:21:16.684-07:00That's alway the way isn't it. Thanks for ...That's alway the way isn't it. Thanks for stopping by. And thanks for the Tom-Toms I learned something.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-46551049114138421962012-05-19T17:19:26.548-07:002012-05-19T17:19:26.548-07:00That's exactly what I was going for. I'm g...That's exactly what I was going for. I'm glad you like it and thank you for commenting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-8862624831899971952012-05-19T08:40:46.355-07:002012-05-19T08:40:46.355-07:00I did follow along quite nicely...Toddy is the bes...I did follow along quite nicely...Toddy is the best name ever too! The insults and the way they spoke to each other was a treat! I think that's what I like best about your story...yep, that's the best!<br /><br />~SusanSusan Wenzelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05441251619321494571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-62108503384443088252012-05-19T01:23:41.585-07:002012-05-19T01:23:41.585-07:00A snapshot of a conversation between boys - how th...A snapshot of a conversation between boys - how they love to insult each other. Nice one.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-42532959943018104602012-05-18T13:51:24.685-07:002012-05-18T13:51:24.685-07:00I love the way that children talk to each other an...I love the way that children talk to each other and it normally conceals deep friendship. Nice One.<br /><br />Here's mine for any others who happen along: http://womanontheedgeofreality.com/2012/05/18/friday-fictioneers-god-plays-the-tom-toms/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-56979413036762472812012-05-18T13:49:34.034-07:002012-05-18T13:49:34.034-07:00Great diaglogue - really felt like I was out in th...Great diaglogue - really felt like I was out in the English woods walking with a couple of lads. The bad stuff begins to happen.....<br /><br />Mine is here: http://erinleary.wordpress.com/2012/05/18/eirinn-go-brach/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-13619798247818205552012-05-18T12:45:26.944-07:002012-05-18T12:45:26.944-07:00Hey no worries, thanks for returning the favor.Hey no worries, thanks for returning the favor.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-69072183123102847222012-05-18T12:44:21.369-07:002012-05-18T12:44:21.369-07:00It's good to have a partner in crime isn't...It's good to have a partner in crime isn't it. I think guys have it made when they are young. They get to call each other names and they love each other more for it. Thanks for commenting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-7716414520913771772012-05-18T12:34:27.631-07:002012-05-18T12:34:27.631-07:00Toddy finding himself funny made me laugh! Now I&#...Toddy finding himself funny made me laugh! Now I'm wondering what the noise was....<br />Thanks for your comment on ours. :-)Joanna (Lazuli Portals)http://www.lazuli-portals.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-25285769970733583972012-05-18T11:27:10.498-07:002012-05-18T11:27:10.498-07:00Love the camarade, lurking beneanth the banter, (w...Love the camarade, lurking beneanth the banter, (wouldn't say insult, really) I have 3 boys and I know how they can behave. The last bit sounded ominous. Mine is here:<br />http://readinpleasure.wordpress.com/2012/05/18/friday-fictioneers-sinking-low/Reading Pleasurehttp://readinpleasure.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-62931381091561173432012-05-18T11:11:39.246-07:002012-05-18T11:11:39.246-07:00You never know. When I saw the picture I wanted to...You never know. When I saw the picture I wanted to make it sinister, then I though better of it and went with Toddy and Errol. Toddy makes this story. I think I would not have published this one if I didn't use Toddy the chubby thing. I like Toddy too. Thanks for stopping by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-54769442142623103822012-05-18T11:08:52.154-07:002012-05-18T11:08:52.154-07:00Thanks so much. In the picture it's such a nic...Thanks so much. In the picture it's such a nice day, why wouldn't two boys be out making something happen. I think these two are just lifelong friends. I think if they were brothers there might be a little more venom behind the insults, but not much more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2683546294148728416.post-83960094732151326142012-05-18T11:06:34.670-07:002012-05-18T11:06:34.670-07:00Thank you so much. I had a time using young boys f...Thank you so much. I had a time using young boys for my characters. So that I guess the insults working well is a good sign. THank you for replying first and enjoying the story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.com